Improving paragraphs exercise: transitions

Description:
In questions that ask you to help with improving paragraphs, look at both the paragraph and sentence level. A major problem in some paragraphs is a lack of effective transitions, both between sentences and between paragraphs.

In this exercise, you will practice identifying effective use of transitional devices.

Learning resources:
Review the following learning content:

• Improving paragraphs: effective paragraphs

Exercises:

Set 1

For each of the following pairs of sentences, find a transitional word or phrase that connects the ideas in each of the sentences together.

• 1. The plant installed automated machinery. There will be layoffs soon.
• 2. Jay is in love with Daisy. Their relationship is not destined to be long lasting.
• 3. Einstein’s theory was ultimately accepted. He reputation was assured.
• 4. Washington believed in a strong Federal government with far-reaching power. Jefferson believed in preserving the states’ power and minimizing the role the Federal government would have in the new nation.
• 5. Some domesticated animals can provide more than simple companionship. Dogs are commonly trained to assist the visually impaired.

Set 2

For each of the following pairs of sentences, find a transitional word or phrase that connects the ideas in each of the sentences together.

• 1. Robert objected to the city council’s decision. He organized a protest outside town hall.
• 2. Robert rejected the city council’s decision to raise taxes. He knew there was a major budget crisis.
• 3. First Robert organized a protest to object to the city council’s decision. He began a letter-writing campaign.
• 4. Robert believed in minimizing government involvement in economic policies. He rejected all attempts to use taxes to change the public’s behavior.
• 5. After listening to the economist’s speech, Robert became motivated to take action. He organized a protest outside town hall.

Set 1 Answers:

Keep in mind that there is likely more than one transitional word or phrase that could be used in each case; these answers represent a valid choice and indicate the kind of transition that can be used with each pair of sentences.

1. Therefore
2. However
3. Thus or As a result
4. On the other hand or In contrast
5. For example or For instance

Set 2 Answers:

Keep in mind that there is likely more than one transitional word or phrase that could be used in each case; these answers represent a valid choice and indicate the kind of transition that can be used with each pair of sentences.

1. In fact or Indeed
2. On the other hand or However
3. Next or Then
4. Therefore or For this reason
5. Hence or Accordingly